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Let's Critique Yuping + Negai 01 - Something

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It's more of a critique than a let's play and you'll see why.

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No, you don't suck, ... ( 2 months ago by Onirayushizobura)
No, you don't suck, your game sucks. You just have to work harder and put more time into fine tuning the game.
Don't care anymore. ... ( 2 months ago by megaadultz)
Don't care anymore. I know I suck. So Im gonna live with it
If you're going to ... ( 2 months ago by Kubbles1)
If you're going to design games, you had better get used to this. That's my only advice.
I honestly don't ... ( 2 months ago by UltraJMan)
I honestly don't care about the pronounciation heh, I'm trying to give a good critique to help you better your material in the future.
Harsh criticism ... ( 2 months ago by UltraJMan)
Harsh criticism goes to any game, even big name hyped titles that are great. So Kubbles1 is right there, I'm still gonna finish your game to see if any ideas later put your engine to a better use but I highly doubt it right now.
As multiple people ... ( 2 months ago by TyrannosaurusVox)
As multiple people have said, it's not that you suck, it's that the game sucks. You know the reasons why, so try to fix them. Maybe find someone to bounce your ideas off of; I know that I've done so with JMan for my own game, and he's hit me with plenty of ideas that we've been able to talk through. Just find someone who knows gaming, and let them help you. Being whiny about it is never the answer. Anyone can make this work if they want; it's not magic. Just get to it.
this game looks ... ( 2 months ago by shizeninho)
this game looks really bad
The character is ... ( 2 months ago by markopolo1993)
The character is from Maple Story and the first boss is too
Then where did ... ( 2 months ago by Celysus)
Then where did bannedstory get their sprites? Hmm? ;)
If you spent 3 ... ( 2 months ago by Seeric)
If you spent 3 months making this game like you say you did, you should take comments and UltraJMan's critique and use them to tweak the game.
As I see it the priority order is:
1. fix bugs, varying jump heights and falling through floors is game-breaking
2. balance combat system either make normal attack stronger and/or make specials more mp costly or do less damage
3. Make boss patterns longer or less predictable
4. consistent graphics and easy-to-read font (least important, most work)
K.I'll work on that ... ( 2 months ago by megaadultz)
K.I'll work on that for my next game(s)..If i ever make more games...
Hey even your ... ( 2 months ago by Broderkorv)
Hey even your mother call you a nigga!
And she's black.
I wonder how many months you spend on making yourself. dickbrain
the character jman ... ( 2 months ago by ranekdadr00d)
the character jman plays looks like an efing maple story character...
it is a maple story ... ( 2 months ago by AphelionDustwake)
it is a maple story character
You pronounced the ... ( 2 months ago by EternalNightmare1)
You pronounced the word "vary" wrong. It should be pronounced like the vord "very". Or that might just be a regional thing. I don't know.
they are MS chars, ... ( 2 months ago by AbsoluteDead)
they are MS chars, its all a MS thing >_>
Dude...you knew ... ( 2 months ago by Ayanami555)
Dude...you knew what the jman was like before you got into this, didn't you?
YAY! We are back to ... ( 2 months ago by TheBrassMunkey)
YAY! We are back to let's plays!
The characters are ... ( 2 months ago by tomloadsadosh)
The characters are from maplestory.
what happened the ... ( 2 months ago by narutofan11111111)
what happened the satan sma and the basetball game
funny thing is, I'm ... ( 2 months ago by bast963)
funny thing is, I'm playing maple while watching this
It's Balrog! HUZZAH! ( 2 months ago by omgwtfbbqlollol)
It's Balrog! HUZZAH!
this looks like ... ( 2 months ago by Aj556677)
this looks like maplestory..........
how? ( 1 day ago by crudly123drawn)
how?



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